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alexander (c) *Xphringe EDIT- he's LEGALLY blind. i'd really appreciate it if you would please refrain from leaving comments like 'if he's blind...' and so and so. it's quite irritating when you people question my artistic ambitions/intentions. ARTISTIC FREEDOM. Comments
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I must say, I did like this piece. It's quite beautiful. When I first saw his eyes, it reminded me of a little girl I know who is legally blind. I have no idea, but your eyes, whoa.. They're amazing. They catch your gaze and keep you there for the longest time.
My only dislike would have to be the fingernail coloring. It's.. Different. I'm not sure how to help with that since I am not an artist, but, maybe make them more realistic would be a good idea.
I do have to say, the shading and such makes the boy look rather realistic. Which, in my opinion, is very awesome.
^.^ Well, I hope this helped.
~Raye
first off
the hand/ fingernails seem a but, off, im not sure what it is, maybe this charachter had very slim finger tips but they seem odd, like, way to slim. the coloring on the nails seems to not be smooth enough, i would smooth it out and add highlights to make it more realistic.
second
the eyes, im not farmiliar with this charachter or person but are they blind? if so should thier eyes not just simply be staring straight ahead insted of capturing us with thier gaze? and maybe have less of a sheen to them?
if not, then the lack of pupils is odd looking, i love the color of the eyes but the pupils should be black.
by the way, i love the hair and shading. you are very tallented, keep up the good work!
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